Whispers In The Dark

by TaKe Me As I Am   Feb 10, 2008


Whispers in the dark
You think no one hears
But it's whispers in the dark
That everyone fears

When your guard's let down
And your back is turned
It's whispers in the dark
That will leave you feeling burned

Your best friend likes your boyfriend
Your parents are ashamed
But to your face it's always smiles
Everyone plays this twisted game

When no one thinks you're listening
The whispers in the dark begin
The pain felt is unbearable
Penetrating even the thickest skin

So be sure not to turn your back
Don't ever close your eyes
The whispers in the dark will echo
Telling you everything you know is a lie

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  • 10 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Wow. Just freaking awesome!!! I loved every word, the flow is great. A real winning piece you have here.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A seriously amazing poem. the flow was excellent. the beginning really caught my attention and there's an. .aura around the poem while being read, you know. . anyway. .at first i was gonna say that the third stanza were my favorite lines. but i dunno. I can't pick one! lol. The poem, as a whole, was amazing. .too amazing to simply pick out ONE stanza. :] 5/5 definitely.