This poem's plot was unique. A juliet was saved by a man, fell in love, but the man didn't return any love to her. The whole poem was written in a nice flow and with good rhymes. I liked the whole idea and poem, keep it up! 5/5

He stiry is so beautiful, i mean both plot and the language both
and also i want to say i like the way you name your poems, because it's a really special skill, and all your poems I've read are have bright and beautiful names, i mean they cath your attention:)))
5/5

Fantastic poem. It was beautifully penned, and good choice of words. One remarkable story has turned into a poem, amazing 5/5.

-Sarah A.

Fantastic poem. It was beautifully penned, and good choice of words. One remarkable story has turned into a poem, amazing 5/5.

-Sarah A.

This poem is... so depressing.

Really has alot of emotion in it, The structure and flow were amazing... But it's so depressing! lol, I got left with like this terable feeling at the end,

great job though!

This was sad. a real tear jerker.

"She afraid to love him"
needs to be
"She's afraid to love him"

just thought you should see that.
5/5 great write

.. This is amazing . It brings out alot of talent . This left me speechless . Perfect flow , rhymes and imagery . Alot of the rhymes you don't see too often . 5/5