Yeah, there is seriously something wrong with our world.
I view the world, as in your poem.
I had a problem with this line
"Such faithless faith"
it kind of contradicted itself. mainly because faith, cannot be faithless.
otherwise, the poem was very strong with emotion, and explaining all the wrongs in the world. the flow was excellent.
Beautifully penned ... love the way you have structured the poem and it flowed beautifully...
"Walking seperate paths
Make untruthful friends.
Their unwise decisions
Equal broken amends."
^^ we have be so careful while making friends... trust is one thing that is broken so easily... wonderful lines...
"Our imaginary love
With those phony allies.
Your rigid embraces
My unbearable sighs."
Wow i must say that you really put lots of your thoughts into writing this poem.I love each and evry stanza of it. you put in such a way that poetrical( idk if tt word exist) yeat in a logical manner.Btw it seems to look finished for me