Again you have wrote one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. I admit the format was kind of awkward, but it didn't matter in this case. The concept of this poem was just simply beautiful. I loved it. Again you have proved that you're one magnificent poet. Keep up the great work!
as always it is nice hearing from you.
the format is just a concept that i chosed to be that way, because in my opinion it slow down the reading speed, it is just how i see it myself.
thank you again, it is great seeing you again here in this great community of P&Q
Awww. You started writing again for your "future wife". That's so sweet. I agree with Letty, the format was really awkward, but It you read it with out all of those spaces it flows really well. I like the rhymes, they felt natural and not forced. Overall this was a great poem!
This is such a sweet write. :] I'm glad to see you are back. The flow in this was pretty good, and you worded some things very originally and nicely in this. I loved this part most;
I went to every street of
The love land
Collecting all the words
For a new write.'
I like the metaphor you used here. Well done. :]
"I am writing her
Happy Valentines Day
This year is
The most important valentines of my life
I have the love of my future wife."
This is my favorite stanza cuz it has so much meaning in it. Its good to have you back and writing poems. I realy enjoyed readint it. dast xosh.
A really cute feel-good poem. I thought the structure was a little awkward too but after reading it through a second time it makes more sense and keeps the words nice and simple. I like the idea of the bird with a broken wing aswell.
Awww it was so adorable i loved it! neither of us have written lately lol, i think i forgot to put on a couple of my poems. i know i have one more to put on, but i just haven't been into writing, i'm pretty braindead i guess. writer's block has been upon me for a very long time unfortunately. hope everything is going well, get back to me when you get the chance!