I love it

Muy perfecto! 5/5.
Comment mine if you got some time.

That was really good:]
i loved it.

Omgosh, absolute perfect wording and perfect flow. the only thing i would change is maybe adding sum punctuation

This one was great too! :]]

This one's flow was better. You're a great writer!

Cayce xx

Good poem... short but very good... nice work. 5/5

Great flow and againg I feel the pain here and I have been in this place with someone but she choice life thank God keep the poems coming 5/5

Tammi,

Ok, like on this poem i just went in and added sum capitals, commas, periods, and corrected sum you're/your. what do u think of how it looks now?

Why Fight?

You're sitting there upon you're bed,
thoughts are racing through your head.
You're thinking hard about this knife,
should you plunge or keep your life.
You plunge it deep, your flesh goes numb.
Your mind a haze, your time has come.
You fade away into your night,
to enter your eternal flight.

Wow this poem is deep
i love it 5/5

Wow that was amazing and very sad

Wow another great one lol you r a great writer
email me when you get a new 1 up btw how old r u hunn?

missunderstoodcass@gmail.com

I like this..haha i say this about all of yours..well i cant help it because your a very good writer...this was amazing i have a life like this where i sit on my floor with that knife but i decided to live day by day

Can relate to youre poem, like it alot

Your poems are short but they flow really well and are very well written. I do like them.

Awwwz wat a said poem but i can relate to feeling like u dont kno if u want to live or die!! i just got done with cutting! it was prolly the hardest thing to quit and i still have erges to want to cut!! but great poem! =D altho its sad!

<3 i love you silly

That is really amazing good job!
5/5

I love love love this one. I am adding to my favriates.

10/5

Wowwy you're really good

Cool!! man I like rhyming lol and that was short and sweet and to the point! =]

The emotions expressed in great choice of words leaves me speechless.. This is such a powerful write and the imagination in this piece is captivating.. Very intense and eloquent images potrayed and I am awed by the creativity of the words combined in this poem...
5/5