I like this alot. It calls all sadness to come together......and in the end....it is a terrible life......good job...5/5....xoxo

Amazing poem. terrible life. but aren't all lives terrible?

Great poem!!! love your topic and i really felt the message that was hidden!! 5/5 :P

Wow very deep poem! loved it girly 5/5 <33

Wow that is really really really good! i like it a lot! very nice job

Good Job, Keep it up!!!

Incredible, the world is filled with such sadness and you captured it all, but there are beautiful things in the world to, and in your poem you speak of them to, just incredible. keep it up

The ending is so sad, but its my favorite part of the poem.
i love it.. great job!

You ended this piece beautifully. great write. 5/5.