It wasn't bad you liar! lol It was a decent poem... the flow was alright and the word choice was decent. :P loved it!

It was a good poem, you have some errors though.

I think it would be better if you wrote this in the past tense. Coz I think you were trying to tell a story in the poem.

I might be wrong - so it's up to you if you want to change it.

Anyway it was a fantastic poem - you wrote this when you were at 6-7th grade. To be honest I can't write when I was that young. So you really have the potential you improve. Never stop writing! :)

5/5 from me!

I agree not 100% but still emotion filled and a great piece that could inspire, i know my work from when i was in grade six wasn't good lol----nice job, tara