Can't handle the loss

by deadly sun   Feb 15, 2008


My mind is spinning, I'm mentally disturbed
my brain is being bent and slowly fractured
i can't handle these thoughts
the thoughts of you and him
hes filling that space
that space i once was in
so this is the first of many
my many cries to you
please come back to my arms
and we'll make our love anew

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  • 16 years ago

    by Zvetty

    I could feel the pain as well .... i know what your passing ... i menan yee it sucks seeing the one you love with another person.... same here ejj ....

    hope things will turn good for you
    but on the whole its a great poem ....

    *zvetty*

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow... i really enjoyed reading this poem.. i really could feel your pain... :/

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    Love this one xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    I like this poem , its intriguing

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