Aww. I love this poem ur awesome :)

Aww. i love the end, took a twist i didn't expect....great.

An amazing piece .... you must love that person ....

*zvetty *

DANG!!!! This is a really good poem. It like the ending. I like how in the beginning you make it seem like the two of you are engaed in dialogue, but in the end it's all in your mind and that you still don't have her. This is really good.

Really very good , i like the whole how you make us believe the whole situation and then show that its not real...
your really good, she best have come around, cause this is really beutiful :)

xxxx