It used to be me

by xSecond Chancex   Feb 16, 2008


It hurts so much to see u with her knowing its been a year
it kills me that used to be me
beside you now i turn around
and know it will never be
see babe i have hurt u so
and i lost my chance with u
i tried to tell u last nite
how i felt, but i got scared
for what might be
so i told u it was silly
and that i shouldn't have brought it up
now im dying
cuz u will never know how i felt

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    I know how u feel, however poetry wise, it doesnt have much flow to it, maybe counting out some rythm in it or something just adding commers etc might help.

    still really good tho think it just needs a lil work

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    I know EXACTLY how ypu feel and i couldnt have said it better myself