This one is different and i sorta like it:)
5/5

Lol awesome!! i love this one. lol

Lol awesome

Marvellous work. Honestly I've never read anything that captures homie so well.

Dang so harsh lol

Lol so wow thats passion rite trhere

Somehow, I think this should be in the humor section.
Good poem, by the way.

Great poem short but strong. great job i liked the anger in it.

Lol nise construction there huh?

I like its not idk its unigue and so good so short and sweet passionatly angry its perfect thank you

Lol, Nice.