That is so beautiful! I mean, it's been said before but you put it so well. The first line was really good. The way you broke it up was interesting but showed the flawlessness of the flow. Good job!
*ME*

Love the structure, dropping the last word of the phrase to the next line works really well for this poem. It's really sweet as well =)

Em xXx

Nice poem.. its sweet. 5/5

Good poem shows alot toward what your feeling for the person good job 5/5

Yes! All the things you want to say to that special someone, before you can't. I like the way you came across with that.

WOW this is like a perfect poem! Even though it is short it has soooo much meaning. Each line is really deep and filled with so much emotion. I actually read it a couple of times because it is just so beautiful!!

Kiss me again but not too
Fast
Savor our moment for it may be our
Last

I love the way you dropped the last word to the next line. It really does something for the poem and kind of makes it more interesting to read!

Tomorrow's not promised so savor
Today
Tell them you love them before they fade
Away...

The ending is just beautiful!.. Excellent advice that everyone should follow. If you love someone.. LET THEM KNOW before it is too late.

Excellent poem! Amazing job but im sure you already know that. More people should read this poem and appreciate it. It takes true talent to say so much with so few words.

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Omg! i love this poem!! its so true and heartfelt. great job!!! 5/5