Still in love..

by moonlil   Feb 17, 2008


Lost you one year ago
but my feelings didn't change
I'm still missing you so.

Don't know what to do
my only work is to think about you.

Lost in sorrow and pain
your love is still running through my veins.

Can't get you out of my mind
missing your words so sweet and kind.

Want to be in your arms so much
feeling your tender touch.

I hope my dreams will come true
cause the only thing I ever wanted is being with you.

Even though you are in heaven above
you still have all of my love.

God just couldn't see
that you were the one for me.

But soon we will be together
united again and happy forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    You put a lot of emotion into this poem and it's amazing, excellent job
    Your a very good writter
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Simply Trying

    This is great

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Moonlil,

    This poem has such a yearning vibe to it. I love the way you expressed yourself. The flow is great. I wonder how it would be if you were to make 4 line stanza's with the second and fourth line rhyming. Let me know when it's done, alright?(that is if you want to, of course)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Amazing poem!
    its just soo sad and heart breaking...
    it was very well written...

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Moonlil
    A very heartfelt piece. The pain of losing the one we love hurts so much.

    Want to be in your arms so much
    feeling your tender touch.

    One day you will be reunited again. Until then hold on to your memories.
    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

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