Comments : Drunk/drugs/stab/death

  • 12 years ago

    by Lance

    This is deeep and alot of passion

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Brian Yazzie

    THIS IS A CRAZY STORY..AND IT WOULD BE ONE OF THOSE THAT WOULD BELONG IN MY FAVS..5/5..CONTINUE WHAT YOU ARE DOING GURL..I LIKES THAT..

  • 12 years ago

    by Francis Vaska

    It has a lot of passion and commitmont, good choice of words, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Wow......what a really good story...i love this. great job and i felt so sad for the guy.....wow you really know how to put emotions into this. great job. i love it. =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Aveena

    Wow. im speechless...
    that was soo powerful... real emotions. made it feel like I was the one in the story.