This is sad and some times i feel this way arpund my fam but then it all changes in a split secind thanks for shaering your peom and think that lots of people feel this way everyday

I love youre poem alot
5/5
good written and i think you should read mine k:)might interest you
anyways you poem is full of emotion and has an amazing flow
keep it up k

Very emotional..great job!
5/5
Aly

So emotional...i love it...5/5....= )

I love how short the emotion you have in this piece is, now its great emotion and works very well with you rhyming sceme and no i have nothing bad to say about this poem. - Raindrops 5/5