Life

by Jeremy   Feb 19, 2008


Life wow most people don't know What to do with their lives or where they want to go like i know where i want to go but my life is covered in darkness and i have no light to lead me so i trip and fall and i have no one to help me just people to kick me when i am down so i pick myself up and look forward and i see the light in the darkness but i don't know how to get to it so i look and look but i still cant find it thats the story of my life

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  • 16 years ago

    by fallenforever

    Sorry another tip, try to use punctuation cause otherwise some things can be misinterperated. its really sad but full of feeling your a really good poet