My Bloody Suicide

by brokenmind   Feb 20, 2008


This is my existence
Ended by the knife
Blood spills and splatters
To end my stupid life.

As here i lay dying
My short life passes through my eyes
Hurt, upset and anger
Broken promises and lies.

Death is upon me
And My soul starts to fade
For all the sins i commited
With my life i have paid

Here i am now
No longer realistic
Destined to be
Just Another statistic

Blood stained blue skin
Eyes shut and body cold
I am gone
And my story is told

Theres nothing left to hide
This is my bloody suicide

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  • 17 years ago

    by alwayzforgottenxx

    I loved this poem mm yum 10/10 xx leah

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    I loved this poem.
    It was a sad sort of beauitful.
    You obviously posess a lot of talent.
    <3Raych

    thanks for commenting on my poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by BlEeDiNg FoR tHe OnE i LoVe

    I agree with Exotic that is my fav. stanza.... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Here i am now
    No longer realistic
    Destined to be
    Just Another statistic
    ---------------

    I would have to say this is my favorite stanza it's so deep and full of emotion obviously so are the other its just that this one really stood out. The poem its self is very simple yet bold if you get where I am coing from (: keep up the great work mwah xxxx Love Roxy

  • 17 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I loved this poem!
    Nuff said.
    5/5

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