Excellent poem... i liked it alot... the flow was perfect...lines werent too long or too short... it was flawless..

and i like the fact that you repeated the second stanza and also made it the last.

good work. keep writing.5/5

This poem was well written. The flow was decent, the word choice was good and the concept was different. I like it, but I'm not fond of repeating stanza's. I feel more when the poet uses more creativity.

Good poem. it's a fast read which means great flow, again nice job.