Awww dats so sweet, but sad
i exactly lik dat bout my ex boyfriend,
i still love him, but he unfortuanlly has a girlfriend which makes my feel wierd wen im around him,
but anyway great job i absolult loved it
5/5
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This was strong and written very well.
Though it was very little wording, The point came across strong.
It's Very Very well written.
Keep Writing and I Hope Things Get Better.
5/5

-Ally

Awww that is sad it makes me think of what a screw up i was with my boyfriend.

My ex bf is going to lose me for good and he is going to feel that way any sooner. this is really great and yes its sad but something happens wrong always ending up regreting about it.

Lesthat u could have told me how you felt.great job!
**harlea

I liked it alot. I dont believe she would ever be over you fully because you and her had a baby! you should always know that you will have a special place in her heart! So if you really want her back, go out and get her dont sit and wait just because she is taken. But i think it is short sweet and down to the point! Keep your head up smile be happy for everything you got and everything your going to have later in th future((5))

Dont we all? haha great great poem. simple but it expressed how you felt VERY well. i think it was excellent. id love if ud check out suma my poems! 5/5

This poem is sooo beautiful in just a small amount of words. Great job. Keep it up! :)

That was short but a very very beautiful poem!...
Good job!!..Lots of emotion shown in here...
5/5..^_^