This poem was really well written. The flow was good, the word choice was decent, and the concept was great! It seemed to be heart-felt as well. 5/5

I really liked this. i have 2 suggestions

"sometimes I wish,
that I'd die"
if you changed the "I'd" to "I would" it would make that stanza flow better.

and, on the last stanza, the word "your" shoild be changed to "you're"
thats all. lol
it was a good poem. very deep and expressive.
5/5

This poem couldve been better but it was alright. The feeling of it was great and the words were great however the ending could use some work and the flow and rhyming did not stay constant throughout the poem. The idea of the poem was good and the rythm was good, definately worked though a little boring. overall, it wasn't great but it was simple and I liked it. if you worked with it you could probably make it a really good poem. keep writing! 4/5

I love the short lines - its concise, but expressive. i like how you said you're done shedding tears. this poem has a decisive edge- it has backbone.

Wow I loved it. The emotion in it was great!

The 4th stanza really does not rhyme but it still has its flow...i like how your poems ore so short but yet so emotional. i use to be able to do that but to much stuff made me forget quite how. nice job
-Raindrops 5/5