You

by Anaisthitos   Feb 23, 2008


Running.
Laughing...Crying?
Chased by my fears, being confirmed by the backwards hell that is my mind.
Dreaming, screaming.
Running from you,
to you.
You:
My sickness,
my health.
My Obsession.

Taking over me, corrupting me.
Converting me to see a different way,
through eyes tinted of foil and blood.
Blood drawn from
the scars on my body,
the scars on my soul,
they are you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Short and sweet, Once again great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    This is unique, i think i've never read a poem like this. There are so many emotions put in 2 stanzas
    and such short sentences kinda intensify atmosphere of the poem
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Amazing,really like it!
    fav. line:Chased by my fears, being confirmed by the backwards hell that is my mind

  • Wow nice wording. very good. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Ok first of all, i got confused. im going to be honest, you should put more lines together to make it flow out of the readers mouth instead of it just plopping out. theres a lot of emotion in this poem. 4/5