by Anaisthitos Feb 23, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Running. |
by Polaroid
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Short and sweet, Once again great job |
by Lizaveta
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This is unique, i think i've never read a poem like this. There are so many emotions put in 2 stanzas |
by she
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Amazing,really like it! |
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Wow nice wording. very good. 5/5 |
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Ok first of all, i got confused. im going to be honest, you should put more lines together to make it flow out of the readers mouth instead of it just plopping out. theres a lot of emotion in this poem. 4/5 |