When You Really Love Him

by Alexandria   Feb 23, 2008


When you really love him,
His sent makes you shudder,
His hands upon your skin,
Chills rolling down your spine,
Your heart kept in a tin.

When you really love him,
Your eyes gazing on him,
He bares no fault to you,
As he holds you in arms,
There's no wrong he can do.

When you really love him,
Its difficult to think,
Without him in your mind,
Changing how you act,
Its as if you're blind.

When you really love him,
He guides your every move,
Sweet kisses in the night,
Always making you smile,
Forever in your sight.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gentry

    I love this. <3

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by El

    Fantastic poem!
    I enjoyed reading it
    Keep writing =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Great poem! Really felt... The flow was good, the word choice was great, and the concept was beautiful! Great write 5/5!

    "Sent" -- "Scent" :P ... to get the right grammar...

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    AWWW!!! THIS IS A SWEET POEM I HOPE MY NEXT BF I FEEL THAT WAY ABOUT HIM, GREAT WRITE!!...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetGurl

    Wow its soo true i liked it soo much good job!!