Very beautiful
Lovely rhyming
good job...as usual!
5/5 xD

Well said

Your grouping is perfect!
The words flow and it's easy to read.
I love it! Keep'em comin!
I'll be lookin out for yours

-Dave

Broken are the youth who pray for death....

WOW!!! That was amazing...it flowed together perfect and i love the last stanza idk why but i did...ur an amazing poet keep up the good work...never stop writing...5/5....

This is an amazing poem...it's really hard to read it if you know of anybody who's like that

Wow.. such a unique poem, so intense. I loved it, every single line was just perfect and simple. Great job, keep it up. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Beautiful, just beautiful. I could really relate. Thank you for sharing that with us! Keep up the great writing!

Thats really deep.
sounds like a few people i know at times.
but still really good!
5/5

I love this poem so much aii

I enjoy an ending with some snazz and this one had it :D

A Single Wish
Addicted Like Meth
This young girl
Wishes For Death

= amazing

I really like this... this is really good ^^ full of sadness... but wonderful.

5/5

--**Skye~

-Plz check out some of my poems!!-

I liked it!

And am addicted to simple writings and ur poem is so great,simple and direct...I did love it so keep it up5/5..and keep smilin:)

Sadly beautiful is ur poem..dunt give up to depression..i liked it..keep it up!!