I Love You & I'm Sorry

by Dave   Feb 27, 2008


(please read this and tell me what you think, I ask that you be honest and any tips would be nice and please feel free to critique me with any thing you would change for better flow. thanks)

Every kiss creates a spark in my life
Every touch sends a warm rush
Every word ignites my heart
And every time I see your face
My life and my soul feel your embrace

I love you more than words could ever describe
I wish you can look in my eyes and see me cry
Just hold my hand and tell me that I yours
Nothing eles matters except those three words

I'm sorry I hurt you the way I did
I feel so bad and I promise, it will never happen again
I can't take it back, and believe me
You are everything that I desire and everything I lack
You complete me in a way to where I don't look back

Every day I see you with new eyes
Not yours but mine
Within them are spots that you clean
I hope you understand what you mean to me

I promise I'm not every other guy
If you think I am then why did you even try?
When I see you, you're alone
You stand out, one and among many
And you glow so brightly

I will say it again only because I love you
I'm sorry and I'm not about to go
You're my one and only
I thought that you deserve to know
That you're the only one for me
And you've changed my life greatly.
You are my beautiful Princess Casey...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Beautiful! This Is A Touching Poem. My Only ProblemWith it Is That You May Want To Proofread. There were Gramatical Errors But Other then that, Nothing really Needs To Be Changed. =] I Enjoyed The Lovely Read.

    Hope To See You Around!
    Keep Writing!
    4/5 (Grammatical Errors Brought You Down one =/ )

    -Ally <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    Awwww..this poem was so cute i liked it and you can feel your emotions in it

  • Much better i love it even more

  • Awww sad but i love it...ive been there so many times....

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