A fantastic read. I never had one moment where the flow bothered me. Your theme is excellent as well as your word choice. Superb job on this piece, I am sure I will read more from you. This is really amazing work. Excellent!
I have read your peoms,they are GREATTT...i am impressed,I will be greatly honoured,if you comment on my poems,atleast mark corrections,or give some suggestions,please,your words will be of great importance to me,
OmG...that was..gosh!! Amazing!!!!
I love it so much, the ending stanza is so perfect for me
this is kind od a late comment, but for me its never too late =)
keep writing beautiful xx
I can't imagine the pain and hurt. But you darling expressed it wonderfully! God Bless and keep typing. Your words are the release expressions of ones saddness, pain, love and hope. You're in my prayers. STAY STRONG
This was great Cindy. I could feel your physical pain as well as your emotional pain. I know where you come from in many of these verses, I too, have felt this way at many points in my life. Keep your chin up, you are very strong :)
Well, im not sure if i commented on this poem before, but it doesnt matter. this poem took my breath away! it was amazing. filled with such emotions. i loved it alot.
Sleep the only comfort
Yet so hard to find
Dreams bring some peace
To a tortured souls mind
i find that stanza my favorite and also quite true too. i can relate to this piece and especially this stanza because i feel as if dreaming can take away somewhat of the pain, but they never do last. well, job well done! 5/5.