Comments : Unheard Screams

  • 12 years ago

    by Fake Facade

    Great poem.
    like really good.

    really loved the 3rd stanza, especially the last 2line,
    /Dreams bring some peace
    To a tortured souls mind/

    Really good

  • 12 years ago

    by Alex

    This peom is relatable. i love it.

  • 12 years ago

    by i love him endlessly

    Your words are brilliant.
    =]

    excellent, must i say.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    This is a really deep poem, filled with lots of emotion, love it keep them coming

  • 12 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Now i have read what you have been through your poem is very sad.....brilliant though

  • 12 years ago

    by Damaris

    Aswome! Totally! Congrats on the win too. You did a wonderful job! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Thats a well deserved win. very good poem :D
    congrats :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah

    A beautiful very well written poem...5/5
    I love all that you write

  • 12 years ago

    by Pamela G

    How could I read this poem without crying? Very touching. You are the best poetess on my list.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cainer

    I liked it very much. How true are the words being said!!

  • 12 years ago

    by minh

    Fantastic... i loved the expression and the way you made this poem. 5\5 very good!

  • 12 years ago

    by Danielle

    Beautiful.
    honestly beautiful!

  • 12 years ago

    by Gizmo

    It was beautifully written that i must admit.

    it was a raw piece of work, i read some of your other poems and this has to be the most emotional piece you have. i can't actually find a fault with it.

    i did comment on this before but not an actual proper indetail comment.

    in my opinion the last stanza is the strongest, but the 3rd is the most emotiol.

    anyway well done. good poem x

  • 12 years ago

    by Empathy

    A fantastic read. I never had one moment where the flow bothered me. Your theme is excellent as well as your word choice. Superb job on this piece, I am sure I will read more from you. This is really amazing work. Excellent!

  • 12 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Hi,
    I have read your peoms,they are GREATTT...i am impressed,I will be greatly honoured,if you comment on my poems,atleast mark corrections,or give some suggestions,please,your words will be of great importance to me,
    Thanks

  • 12 years ago

    by Nee

    OmG...that was..gosh!! Amazing!!!!
    heartwrenshing!!!!
    I love it so much, the ending stanza is so perfect for me
    this is kind od a late comment, but for me its never too late =)
    keep writing beautiful xx

  • 12 years ago

    by SG Khan

    I can't imagine the pain and hurt. But you darling expressed it wonderfully! God Bless and keep typing. Your words are the release expressions of ones saddness, pain, love and hope. You're in my prayers. STAY STRONG

  • 12 years ago

    by ReBecca

    This was great Cindy. I could feel your physical pain as well as your emotional pain. I know where you come from in many of these verses, I too, have felt this way at many points in my life. Keep your chin up, you are very strong :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    Well, im not sure if i commented on this poem before, but it doesnt matter. this poem took my breath away! it was amazing. filled with such emotions. i loved it alot.

    Sleep the only comfort
    Yet so hard to find
    Dreams bring some peace
    To a tortured souls mind

    i find that stanza my favorite and also quite true too. i can relate to this piece and especially this stanza because i feel as if dreaming can take away somewhat of the pain, but they never do last. well, job well done! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 12 years ago

    by maryann

    Wow thats beautiful