Comments : I don't want you to go

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Another very well-written poem! The flow was good, the word choice was decent, and I loved the concept! 5/5 -- Grammar please :P lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    Another great poem! I really enjoyed this poem but there was a few flow errors that made it difficult for me to follow along. Otherwise, amazing. 5/5