Other than me

by Brittany Michelle   Mar 3, 2008


You love her
Other than me
You hold her tight
Other than me

She kisses your lips
With a wonderful smile
She admires your touch

Other than me
She is an all star
Other than me
She smiles every minute

You look in to her eyes
Like I wish you would look at mine
You hold her hand
So tight an lovely

Other than me
She is the prettiest
Other than me
She walks with pide

What a lucky girl she is
but she is other than me

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  • 16 years ago

    by desiring love

    I like the emotion behind this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    Good good.
    one suggestion. not to be rude or whatever but
    you spelt pride wrong.
    but othere than that i give you a *5*
    ~SheDevil~

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