Sweetie...there's no explination needed...it says it all..ans I for one.....LOVE it!!...this is sooooooo beautiful...and never be afraid to thank god....or what ur friends might say...it really doesnt matter....cuz god knows ...simply fantastic..thank you....xoxo

Wow...ok I'm 15 and your 14 right? I've been struggling with my relationship with God and to be honest you make me jealous to know you can be soo depressed but still have such a positive view on God. I'm truely moved!
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Amen sometimes I have felt the same and know I always know God is there thanks for writeing this one!!!!

Truely beautiful.im lost for words.i really liked it and thanks for sharing! I got it and it made me think of life...GOd bless you and your family!May he bless all of us in this world.....
Amen.
~Jo Anna EL

Does sound like a moving experience, liked it!

God wins... lol i like this poem. You are very talented. Alot of my poems come froem a very dark time in my life. but i see you have youre fair share of sad ones aswell. I am much more accomplished as a poet now. more than i ever was. i just dont post anything anymore.

The wind was knocked right out of me. your words enter me without a chance for me to breathe. i loved it.. and im glad i read this one.. thank you for writing.. hmm made me think.. thank you. love it 5.5