Care

by your love is mine   Mar 4, 2008


Your eyes give me a smile
your eyes give me laughter
I hope this moment will last a while

I don't know what to say
you make me feel like a can fly.
Today is a new day
to spread my wings and take to the sky

You are my air
tender and sweet.
I know you care with every heart beat.

I wish i could tell
everyone the way i feel.
My heart rings like a bell.
you won my heart like a deal.

The only three words
i have to say
will be carried by birds
to save for another day.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Aww....this is really cute! Just some thoughts:

    "you make me feel like a can fly."
    a should be I.

    "My heart rings like a bell"
    I like this line, but it doesn't really go good with that stanza. I think you should say "My heart rings like a bell" with every.....
    or because you.......
    Just to go further into it so the reader understands it a little more. Otherwise, this poem is so adorable! Thanks for commenting on my poem, and have a Happy Easter!

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