"It was raining, raining hard,
I broke the glass of autumn
Another fracture on my heart,
Wind just got much colder."
^^my favorite stanza by far
I loved the was you started off each stanza with "It was raining, raining hard," it created a certain type of flow that most poems dont have. You did a wonderful job on the flow. Loved it
5/5

This poem was amazingly written! The flow was good, the word choice was great, and the concept was amazing. Great write! 5/5

It was raining, raining hard,
I broke the glass of autumn
Another fracture on my heart,
Wind just got much colder.

loved these lines..

very impressive poem...

beautiful and heart felt...

good work..

Just a beautiful piece poetry! it just really rocks!

Haha hence my name i have to give alteast credit for the great poem, the lines that he me thos most though were in the 4th stanza i believe when you said "It was raining far too hard.
Breathing with soaked sorrow,"
i felt like i was sitting on the other side of the window within the rain nice job 5/5

Beautiful!! Keep the words and art going! Absolutely loved it....a nice taste of Nature....

Another masterpiece in effect. Each line and each word paints an atmosphere and as you continue to read the poem you become so engrossed in the words that you lose yourself into it totally.
I liked the repetition in this one and I think that it was yet another amazing write - flawless and perfect as an artist that has drawn a masterpiece with each word.
Excellent!