Fallen Giant (haiku)

by Beautiful Chaos   Mar 5, 2008


The mighty oak tree
Roots deep and wide drinking earth
Tasting destruction

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow the last line is so powerful. I love how you made it so sweet and wonderful in the beginning, then you go and do a complete 180 and talk about polution and the death of nature (at least thats what I thought it was about) nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    I always enjoy reading haikus but can never write them myself! I like the fact that this one isn't about a perfect situation like most are, it makes a nice refreshing change. Another 5/5

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    'tasting destruction'

    ^^ loved that last line!

    Nicely done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Good Job!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    Lovely

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