Comments : Empty Life

  • 12 years ago

    by Jaymee

    This poem has so much truth in it. It's worded beautifully and flows perfectly. It's becoming quite obvious to me that you can write on any topic you choose, with the end result being the same - brilliant! Keep them coming hun!

  • 12 years ago

    by Diana

    This poem is very thought provoking and written beautifully.

    "When love is an unknown word
    And hate the thriving passion
    When peace is far behind us
    And war the latest fashion"

    What a powerful stanza that is! Great job as always Dennis! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Erika

    You know I love your romantic side the most sweetheart, but the part of you that wrote this is very special too. You always find the right words to express your emotions without losing the rhyme scheme or flow. Excellent!
    Love Erika

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very true... very beautifully penned...

    excellent poem... good work..

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie

    Great poem, deep thoughts perfectly penned. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Your A very talented writter
    Excellent work, i really enjoyed reading this poem


  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    ^When love is an unknown word
    And hate the thriving passion
    When peace is far behind us
    And war the latest fashion^

    A very powerful stanza, timeless and thought provoking. The piece in its entirety has excellent flow, no forced rhymes, even though it contains many "filler" words, it doesn't take away from the read. I think you've done a great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow every single stanza here was perfectly written.. the flow was soo smooth and perfect that it just guided me straight thru the entire poem from the first word to the last..

    I love the style too and the words you chose to use. Everything about this poem was perfect. The topic you chose - everyone can relate to. The way you took different feelings and emotions in each line and gave them a place in society really gave the entire poem a sense of unity and a good flow.

    You did an amazing job on this poem and I hope more people read it. Great job. 10/10 from me =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Fear2love

    I really love the way describe life, ROCK ON!

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Great people writes great things. i can see here. welldone 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow, I love this poem, It's soo true!

  • 12 years ago

    by Yasmine

    Very beautifully written!! I admire this piece of writing :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    You poem is truly amazing, I loved every word of it and The flow is perfect. I think that you have a great way with words, and this poem is going straight into my favorites, 5.5 for you.
    kisses stephanie

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is really a sad piece. Yet it holds so much truth.

    When all these things come to pass
    And every word's a hidden knife
    Then people are merely shadows
    Just living an empty life

    What a haunting stanza.
    Congrats on the win.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, this poem is excellent. I think that every word was meticulously placed and the result is an extremely effective poem. Your clearly heard and the reader leaves with food for thought.


  • 12 years ago

    by shamvi

    Wow...that was really nice...i loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Excellent poem! Congratulation on the win.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ixora

    So true...really cant say much else

    and wonderfully written, it flows perfectly


  • 12 years ago

    by Gness

    I like the "When" description of your poem its like a question answer in one

  • 12 years ago

    by sarah

    Wow that is very powerful. I loved it. keep up the good work.