This poem has so much truth in it. It's worded beautifully and flows perfectly. It's becoming quite obvious to me that you can write on any topic you choose, with the end result being the same - brilliant! Keep them coming hun!
You know I love your romantic side the most sweetheart, but the part of you that wrote this is very special too. You always find the right words to express your emotions without losing the rhyme scheme or flow. Excellent!
^When love is an unknown word
And hate the thriving passion
When peace is far behind us
And war the latest fashion^
A very powerful stanza, timeless and thought provoking. The piece in its entirety has excellent flow, no forced rhymes, even though it contains many "filler" words, it doesn't take away from the read. I think you've done a great job!
Wow every single stanza here was perfectly written.. the flow was soo smooth and perfect that it just guided me straight thru the entire poem from the first word to the last..
I love the style too and the words you chose to use. Everything about this poem was perfect. The topic you chose - everyone can relate to. The way you took different feelings and emotions in each line and gave them a place in society really gave the entire poem a sense of unity and a good flow.
You did an amazing job on this poem and I hope more people read it. Great job. 10/10 from me =)
You poem is truly amazing, I loved every word of it and The flow is perfect. I think that you have a great way with words, and this poem is going straight into my favorites, 5.5 for you.