This poem has so much truth in it. It's worded beautifully and flows perfectly. It's becoming quite obvious to me that you can write on any topic you choose, with the end result being the same - brilliant! Keep them coming hun!
5/5

This poem is very thought provoking and written beautifully.

"When love is an unknown word
And hate the thriving passion
When peace is far behind us
And war the latest fashion"

What a powerful stanza that is! Great job as always Dennis! 5/5

You know I love your romantic side the most sweetheart, but the part of you that wrote this is very special too. You always find the right words to express your emotions without losing the rhyme scheme or flow. Excellent!
5/5
Love Erika

Very true... very beautifully penned...

excellent poem... good work..

Great poem, deep thoughts perfectly penned. 5/5

Your A very talented writter
Excellent work, i really enjoyed reading this poem

5/5

^When love is an unknown word
And hate the thriving passion
When peace is far behind us
And war the latest fashion^

A very powerful stanza, timeless and thought provoking. The piece in its entirety has excellent flow, no forced rhymes, even though it contains many "filler" words, it doesn't take away from the read. I think you've done a great job!

Wow every single stanza here was perfectly written.. the flow was soo smooth and perfect that it just guided me straight thru the entire poem from the first word to the last..

I love the style too and the words you chose to use. Everything about this poem was perfect. The topic you chose - everyone can relate to. The way you took different feelings and emotions in each line and gave them a place in society really gave the entire poem a sense of unity and a good flow.

You did an amazing job on this poem and I hope more people read it. Great job. 10/10 from me =)

I really love the way describe life, ROCK ON!

Great people writes great things. i can see here. welldone 5/5

Wow, I love this poem, It's soo true!

Very beautifully written!! I admire this piece of writing :)

Hey,
You poem is truly amazing, I loved every word of it and The flow is perfect. I think that you have a great way with words, and this poem is going straight into my favorites, 5.5 for you.
kisses stephanie

This is really a sad piece. Yet it holds so much truth.

When all these things come to pass
And every word's a hidden knife
Then people are merely shadows
Just living an empty life

What a haunting stanza.
Congrats on the win.
Take Care Cindy

Wow, this poem is excellent. I think that every word was meticulously placed and the result is an extremely effective poem. Your clearly heard and the reader leaves with food for thought.

Brilliant!

Wow...that was really nice...i loved it

Excellent poem! Congratulation on the win.

So true...really cant say much else

and wonderfully written, it flows perfectly

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I like the "When" description of your poem its like a question answer in one

Wow that is very powerful. I loved it. keep up the good work.