This is so great. Very glad you won the last contest =]

This is a brilliant poem, the word the flow, completely perfect....

Again works of a brilliant mind. there is a lot of this in society today, its really sad. the way words seem to flow from ur fingertips is amazing, your AMAZING! lol

Good piece. It reminded me of one of my own poems called 'When' (don't worry, that's not a hint for you to go and read it...though you can if you want, lol). Good stanzas, good words, good rhymes...so I'll guess we'll say this piece was...umm...let's just say good, lol.

Brad

Omg this really touched me! i love it =]

Oh..wow you are amazing <3

Really nice poem.. i love it
you know that's what we'r facing right now!! ppl dozn know the meaning of love and they are faking every step and every word :S life isn't that good anymore...

Wow, thats excellent xxx

Truley you are the best!
i love your poems!

Absolutley loved it

Amazing..really touching<3

Love is something that doesnt always bring happiness, sometimes good times will come sometimes bad times will, but those in love are never left pining forever.
just take heart and live life to the full.
Life is changing in every direction every moment, life is a new shade, and life is a new sunshine. Every moment on earth live life to the fullest for tomorrow might never come.
Someone to love you with all his heart is difficult to come by, should their be someone like that? He or she is the one for you be sure.

His or her hand you most take, for all you know is tomorrow might never come. In the realm of your eyes, should someone get close to you? Try a million times to control the creasy heart but it shall continue to beat wildly. But think its over this is the moment, this legend might not exist tomorrow.

Your poem is amazing. It was very sad but very truthful too. I love your choice of words and the flow is great. Keep up the good work. I look forward to see more of your work. 5/5

xoxoxox
Jess

Your poem is amazing. It was very sad but very truthful too. I love your choice of words and the flow is great. Keep up the good work. I look forward to see more of your work. 5/5

xoxoxox
Jess

Your poem on first reading may seem quite casual and lacking in impact.It does not scream and shout and demand your attention.But actually it does have a quite power to it. 'When happiness is just a dream
In memory's distant past
And marriage just a fantasy
Which never seems to last'. This is my favourite section of your poem. Thanks for sharing.

ThIS is A gREAT POEM! its so true

Amazing....
and ufortunately accurate.

Simple poem ,massive impact. Loved it

This poem has a real deep meaning.

Good rhyme that keeps the flow.

Em

Well written, enjoyed while going through.....