by Krysten Rogers Mar 7, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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As the light dims, |
by Rashnique
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Is this true??? |
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I agree with the previous comment about "dark" and "night" but asides from that i loved this poem, u really captured the essence of the emotions and pain! well done! take care!! |
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Good poem, except... "dark" and "night" are relevant. Night is dark, therefore... it is obvious. :) So maybe remove the "dark" part. |
by Chelsea
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Wow. |