U didn't even notice

by toni   Mar 7, 2008


You didn't Notice how i laughed at all Ur not funny jokes
You didn't even notice how i talked about you all the time
i noticed how you didn't even read all the love notes
& just threw them out
U saw my imperfections as Flaws
I saw Your's as Beauty
We where to people trying to make things work
In my mind at least
people saw , but they didn't ask
You didn't notice how i fell head over heels for you
You didn't notice how when i fell i was hopeing you would cacth me
you didn't even notice i needed you to care

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Very well written, something ALOT of girls will relate to. Like above, most guys are just ignorant. But youve done a good job with this. Very nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Most guys are careless it's a disease i couldn't fix between my own genre....

    rather than that good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Kim

    This really spoke to me, I can understand exactly how you feel and exactly what you're saying. Well done, 5/5 x

    xxx Kim xxx

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