Eternity without you

by Rachel   Mar 7, 2008


Im lost without you
By my side
So much pain
So many tears
I can't let go
Its hard to breathe
I think about you
Every night
I cry for you
For what could have been
I need you here
Right next to me
Whispering sweet melodies
Of love and happiness
Eternity without you
Seems hard to bare

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  • 17 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Love it
    really made me feel.
    great job.
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammi

    Great poem I can feel the love and your loss through your words it is sad and so heartfelt and I know how u feel keep the great poems coming,

    Tammi,

  • 17 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is a really good poem, with a lot of feeling. This website likes to screw with you when you write 'it's' so, you should fix that! The only thing is that it sounds like it ends too soon...but if you're done, that's all there is! But it's really quite good....repeating the next to me thing was a good touch....
    And if this is coming from recent events, I'm really sorry....I'm always available to talk if you want.

    Rock on!

    Toni

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