Beat down

The emotions are very powerful in this. It is sad though to read about someone being pushed down and kept down. Very good job though.

I really liked this poem the style is different which makes it unique to you
Great job!
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Awwwww so sad but nonethe less I liked it.

Wow dawn. wow. i disagree with musicality. but of course i do. this is great. so emotional. hun, if you ever need to be picked up off the floor, im here. ok? don't ever EVER forget that.