Excellent poem. I didn't realize he was her friend till the end. I like the twist.*5*
>SheDevil<

OMG i love it the passoin was so felt can i do my project on this poem i have to choose 1 then review it :P

Wow, really dark and evil poem! Very well written. It really focusses around this girl and you almost feel pity for her! Great done!

OMG
Loved it.
It was so like descriptive i could imagine a girl and the devil and everything u described!

Holy sh*t. talk about mad poems ...
almost made me cry ... it is so cute in a really sad way ...
5/5

Awesome...great poem... good work..

Omg..such a breathless poem. love it!

but dont worry things will get better. i promise. 10/10 great job with the emotion...i almost leave but u kept my attention.

a little happy in the poem would hurt but other then that i love it.

Wow i really like this poem...what inspired you to write it? Its great

This such a good poem. this is probably one of your best!!!!! ;)

Wow. this poem is really thoughful. i love it!!!

Wow! this is such a good poem!... good job.. keep it up!!! :]

Aw thats so sad and the truth is god is always your friend even if you know it or not.good poem.

I love this poem cauese it expresses what can truly happen and how i feel because sometimes I feel like that the devil is taking over me.

Wow gurl u can write a really good poem how do u do it lol

Wow

Cool poem. The last stanza was awesome! you did very well in this poem. Keep writing. 5/5

That was an aweosme poem i loved it

Do you know how my veins stopped their blood flow? it was reading this stanza and how soft the last line just kissed the seal

but she continued to try
to befriend
this creature in her life
who only sought an end

Who only sought an end

its simple your words but god wow.. they are so.. beautiful words.. 5/5

Wow your poem is amazing every time i log on this is one of the fist places i go to because it such an awesome poem.....5/5 exallent!! =)

-alexis

:/ I'm in a depressing mood.
And this just fit everything I am feeling.
Well put together.