I think that this was good. But I think that u should have broken it up in stanzas. It would look better. But it's good, cuz u showed ur heart in it. And that's good.

Thank you for your comment, well yea this friend is really close to me and he's having alot of problems with his family specialy with money and things like this... i just want him to feel that i'm always here for him :)

Seems like some guy finds a way to do this to EVERY girl i can totally relate 5/5 <33

That poem was just plain wonderful. o.o I know how this feels i really do. I use to cry every night for this guy because he would always toy with me or lead me on. I always got my heart broken. I just want you to know that i always have a spare shoulder you can always lean on even if you say it cant be fixed with tape, a friend can always help. Just another great poem :)
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CourtneyxHolland

True, very good poem . its true though dont mess with it unless you can fix it.