Sun rises

Wow!! This is fabulous!!

Too simple for my taste. You could use so much better adjectives than -cool-
I could see some deeper atmosphere and stronger feelings but than three ending lines disappointed me. I personally don't like this too much, that doesn't mean that it is a bad piece I just don't like it too much.

-where am I, I scream
you shake me to wake me
just another nightmare you say
I look into those eyes of yours
and see nothing at all

help me I scream again and again
you say nothing but look at me with pity-

This past of the poem was good, I think that you could use some more unique words and you should have some punctuation.
Overall I like this one more than your other poem but I am not too impressed.

Who said the nightmare was not over. I see no where in the poem where that feeling is conveyed. I do feel some hidden meaning that the nightmare was in fact having to spend the night with the other individual in the poem i.e. I look into your eyes and see nothing. It seems that the 2 individuals in the poem are very disconnected and the speaker can not find comfort in the presence of the other individual. Honestly, I do not like the poem. For me it is to simplistic. I am not judging your ability to write, just simply not a poem for me. I will read some more material.

Short, good, expressive and sweet ;)

Nice work ,short and sweet ,its about fact that everyone face ,nightmare and how whe look scare, well done