Thats so sad, yet so sweet, great job

Wow! I think this would have to be your best work yet! I may be wrong, but i absolutely love this one. 5/5

I love it !! its so good ! your a very good writter keep it ip!

Beautiful, breath-taking, amazing, sad, but true. Wonderfully written. Best one yet! Sounds like my best friend and the promises I've made to him. So it's personal to me. Great job.

This was an amazing poem...

When I said I want to be with you forever
I meant it.
When I said noone else can or will ever have you
I meant it.

^ this really caught my eyes. because the guy i like, won't ever know this. i'm a gaurdian angel with invisible wings i guess...

great poem. ^_^

Aww...absolutely adorable : ) everyone needs that special someone looking over them 5/5 <33

Very beautiful and impressive poem...

loved it.. good work..

This really made my eyes shine for the tears. I love it like alot. great job You used a good word choice just wonderful written.

<3
CourtneyxHolland

Very emotional. The message is clear and right out there. This poem is very sad though. Keep writting this was good!
-Arielle

Wow that was a great poem!
it nelly brang tears to my eyes!
xo

~tear~ dude My eyes burn just holding back the tears so cute

This is sweet.
Your emotion really shows, great job.

That is so sweet and a very nice poem ... i loved reading it good work

Like the others. I <3 it.
Keep it up.
Ur an excellent writer.

The price of unconditional love can be sad and lonely, at times. I do believe that your loyalty will be rewarded in time, though.

This is a great poem

Love this poem thank that it would be even better if u used always instead of the 2nd ever

This is one of my favorite poems.....love it!!

Really seweet, i liked it

Really seweet, i liked it