I really like it and can really relate to the first three stanzas
good job
5/5
=D

Wow! I really like how you kind of double jeprodized (ignore my spelling) what you were saying. Usually that's not a good thing, but in this case, it was beautiful!
I really like this poem.

And I found it easy to read because all my poems are exactly written in that same format!

This poem also has a really nice flow.
Great Job! 5/5

-Alyssa

Hey,
I think that you have done a great job on writing this poem. The first three stanza are great, the flow in those stanzas are perfect. In the last two stanzas you kind of messed up the flow.

Like in the 4 stanza the last line doesn't fit(But you made me anyways), it messes with the flow.

In the last stanza you didn't rhyme the second line with the last line, like you did in the whole poem, that also messed the flow up. but that's just my opinion. you still get a 5/5 from me because I do like it a lot;)
greets Stephanie

FANTASTIC. i love it alot, so deep and very nice rhyming.

i liked this poem alot

I love this poem and think it should be rated to a 5. oh you should check out my poems sometime . thanks Megan

Wow! such beauty in such a excellent poem! i love it.!! 10/10! great job! i can feel the emotion coming from this poem. love it!

G0od job!!!...>> i love it...
It makes me think,,..
keep on writing..>,,
:P:P
5/5

Beautiful

Thank you all so much! I really appreciate all of this feedback... I'll return the favor as soon as I have time.