This is a very sensual piece written in extremely good taste, and very well written I might add

Not only was this well-written, but it made me want you soo bad ;) It sounds like you really know how to make love passionately. As for the poem, the flow was great, the word usage was astonishing, and the concept was beautiful. 5/5

Off and on this poem lost the passionate heat it hard when it started. A couple of scenes kind of threw it off for me. Seemed a little more graphic than romantic. Still, you managed to keep it clean, and you did bring out some good, vivid images. Not like I was trying to image it, but it would be picture perfect if I did.

Your words were so fulfilling for this poem and the imagery is outstanding. Your piece really grips the reader into the poem and is completely worth the read. :) and you ended it nicely. 5/5