Wow this is a really powerful poem!
Your word choice is amazing and you have real talent for imagery and painting a picture. You did a great job writing this poem and i really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up! and thanks for the comment =)
This poem... is amazing. The way it was written was brilliant. As a writer, not just a poet, you have the highest potential! I really felt every line in this poem which is very impressive. 5/5 and I'm left in awe...
Whoa what a ending! I loved how as I read .. there was a surge in suspense which compelled me to read on and the ending just blew me away. You use of imagery took my out of my reality and instilled me into your poem which made everything you describe easy for me to imagine. Well done. *5/5*
This piece was simply amazing. Your style of writing is amazing and your choice of words are. .powerful. The descriptions and imagery were so intense and the emotions were. .deep. definitely 5/5. no second thoughts.
Completely and utterly speechless. that poem blew me away. it was amazing. i really really love how you did the flashback of the memory of the first kiss in the rain. that part really made the poem for me. and you ended it really well with the falling on the pavement.
keep it up .
12 years ago
Again the word choice was amazing lovely. the flow flawless loved it 5/5 wow.. i read it twice just for the feel of it. it sounded.. well.. different