Lol is so true. damn i wish a parent could b readin dis rite now 2 kno how we really feel. i like da part wenu say they think our life is simple n easy. as simple as decidin black or white. parents dnt kno dat things hav changed n as teens 2day we go through mad hell

Oh wow! this poem is like just...simply amazing. i cant know what else to say apart from this being exactly how so many teens would feel. I know its how i feel and youve done an excellent job at expressing yourself here. This is going in my favorites for sure. loved this write. keep it up 5/5

Amazing poem, i relate to this and its a topic i love to read and write about. you speak so much feelings of truth. well done a truly gat poem xxxxx

This is an amazing poem. LOL. am a parent of 2 teenage girls...and we have a good relationship.But this poem is an eyeopener to me..and has made me think.Parents DO 4get what it is like sumtimes to be a teenager, ur emotions and experiences in those years...and how you just want sumone to UNDERSTAND..not UNDERMINE!! as im admitting us parents can do.We can hurt without us thinking, or knowing, lol. I will take greater care..now i have read this poem.THANKU SO MUCH for a GREAT write, a very heartfelt, enlighting write, that has spoken to me. 5/5

I don't have time to comment this fully, but I loved this.

"They think your life's as simple as deciding black or white,
Not knowing it's the grays between that keep you up at night."

Perfect couplet. Well done :)

Yea. thats true. parents just don't understand and it sucks. Good poem by the way. :)

This was a great piece (as I'm sure you've gathered by now). The words and rhymes are both pretty simple, but I think the reason it's so good how genuine and true to life it was. People could relate. Plus, there was a good tempo to it.

My favorite stanza has to be the second one, if only for the last line. And, I very much liked that rhyme of 'advice' and 'suffice'. 'Suffice' is a good word that doesn't get used too often.

Brad

P.S. I can see you don't really come here anymore (me neither until the other day) but please vote and comment honestly on all the poems you read.

Couldnt find anything better that's just simply amazing good job

Applauding this.
:) LOVE.
5/5

This is a very goog poem, This is how i feel when it come to me talking about boys with my mom

Love it

My god thats true.....my parents are like that all of the time...great poem! i enjoyed reading it! :)
-Emily

Omg I feel for you. My parents arny like that but your words really put an image in my head to what it would be like if my life was yours. Great poem. And maybe you should talk to your parents tell them exactly how you feel. Maybe even show them this poem you wrote sometimes people just need you to spell it out for them if you know what I mean. Good luck :)

I love this poem :)

Excellent and well said I am a teen and that is kinda how if feel really realistic. Keep writing!!!

I. Love. This.

I'm going to read this to mother!
Great job.
5*

Brilliantly penned, each stanza ringing true to every young adult that gets the pleasure of reading this brilliant piece of work!!

beautifully written my friend.

5/5

Best poem ever.

I love this poem. pretty much summed up my whole life.