Just a [[dream]]

by babiiface   Mar 13, 2008


Can you get me outta here??..outta this dark side of life. i ask for one single kissto heal my broken heart. a hug to break the chains of my broken soul, a single smile to cure the pain in my eyes.

everything is weird im trapped in my own skin, i feel weak n sad. but i think of him n it puts a smile on my face.

im hurtin but it'll be fine, he says.. why em i still here..
as i look up i see light, i see whats called heaven, no more pain or this chain. as i lift my head up high, n try to reach for the sky...once again i wake up..relizing its juss a dream..
xoxo
figgy

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  • 16 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    You have some very deep thoughts and ideas here. You've expressed your emotions wonderfully. I'm sure many people can relate to it.

    I think it would help this poem a lot if you separated it into more even lines and stanzas as well as making sure to use proper and complete words (like "just" not "juss", "and" not "n", etc)

    Feel free to PM me if you would like more suggestions on how to improve the structure of your beautiful words.

    ~Ann Marie
    co-manager - WWJW club

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    This poem is wonderful <33 i can tell you wrote it from your heart just by the way it sounds <333

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