Everyone tells me

by halie   Mar 13, 2008


Everyone tells me
to look at the good times not the bad
but, when the good times bring back tears
and the bad ones bring back anger what do you do

everyone tells me
he's not worth it
but what if he is?

everyone tells me
he doesn't deserve me
but what if he does

everyone tells me
just to let go
but what if.... i can't?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Very good, shows the confusion in the situation

    good job keep it up

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Well worded great message really felt your frustration coming through in a way.....nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by Grace

    Gawd girl i feel what u are or were feeling =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Again, you can feel the pain in this poem, the sadnes, the hurt and the betrayal, an dthe longin for something thats not coming back

  • 17 years ago

    by blind soul

    That was great! that what im going through right now! good job!

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