Watch me die

by lovemehard   Mar 14, 2008


Were on tha phone and im crying
i say i hate u and that ure lying
i want u to come over rite away
you said no not today
i begg and plead
saying that ure wat i need
u come oever and we talk it out
u start to scream and i start to shout
i go the tha bathroom and get tha blade
to kill this ugly person that u made
i feel tha blood start to run down
and i feel my body fall and hit tha ground
u hear it and run to my side
screaming that u wish that u woulda rele tried
u scream for me to come back
u tell me that u dont rele wanna get ur things and pack
im laying here and ure wathcing me die
i cant believe our relationship was a lie
in my hand is a note
u take it out, its something i wrote

"words cant explain how much i love you, you said u would never leave me and i believed you. in the end u lied to me and i juss couldnt go on knowing that we would never be together again so to prove my love i took this blade and stuck it to my wrist and i cut deep and watched tha blood drip.....ill love you forever"

you took the note and ripped it to shreads
wishing that u were tha one dead
u take my limp body and hold me
and bed me not to leave
as u take the blade and put it to ur wrist
my lips were the last thing that u kissed

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Omg
    I loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!
    It was so sad but really good

  • 16 years ago

    by PoEtiCmYme

    Wow ..dat was sad n greatly writen dou it seemed like a story line roughly put into a poem at first bu ti got it at the end..this poem is amazin u should put it in a competition or some ...

  • 16 years ago

    by lovemehard

    Please comment or vote my poem this stuff is real