I'm Yours

by Beautifully Disfigured   Mar 17, 2008


Looking for the moment to tell it to you
looking for the words that have become anew
losing my sense of time with every word that you speak
lost in the moment my legs tremble, my knees weak
the way you touch my face and brush the hair form my eyes
the tender kisses you give me the way theyre saccharine
the time you spend with me if even for a moment
I am lost without you dont let this be the end to it
i need you more than ever please say youll stay
I am yours from now and forever I will not walk away

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Though the use of words were simple still you have managed to express a great love that lies behind each and every word of your poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Great job. I really enjoyed this piece. Very well written and very inspirational. keep it up. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by LiNa

    Freaking great poem and i loved it short and sweet and to the point great job

  • 16 years ago

    by BluEyedMemory

    I really enjoyed the idea behind the poem its so true to thoughts of love. Great job

    Emma

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Okay its good write and great feel of love inside but to be honest i want you to read it atleast for one time before posting it to see if there is wrong words but you got the talent and deserve 5/5

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