This is so sad...and so correct...Abortion is so wrong! If you don't want your baby, dont kill it! use adoption!!!!!

So true sissy rose!!

--**Skye~
5/5

Omg!

So good..
I hate people who use abortion, it was their choice to have the kid!

5/5

Added to my faverouts.... which is very few... great topic, very sad

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awwww...
this is so true and so sad!
you did an amazing job of depicting it.

<3
XxAshleyxX

Amazing.

Great poem. you really make your point.

Great poem i agree with it too

"Month One
mommy, I am only 8inches but i have all my organs. I love the sound of your voice. Every time i hear It I wave my arms and legs. The sound of your heart beat is my favorite lullaby."

There should be a space between "8inches" and the "i"s should be capitalized.

I love how you say that his mother's heartbeat is his favorite lullaby, what beauty in those words!

"Month Two
Mommy, today I learned how to suck my thumb if you only could see me you could defiantly that i am a baby. I'm not big enough to survive out of my home though. It is nice and warm in here"

First off, I love how you wrote it in the baby's perspective, and how there are so many emotions just pouring out of this piece alone. Great work, nice descriptions of how he feels and what's going on, you are really touching my heart with this one.

"Month Three
You know what mommy, I am a boy!!! I hope that makes you Happy, i always want you to be happy. I don't like it when you cry, you just sound so sad. It makes me sad too, and I cry with you even though you can't hear me."

Awwww....this is bringing tears to my eyes! He's so innocent, he just wants to make his mommy happy, and he hurts when she hurts. Wonderful wording here, wow.

"Month Four
Mommy, my hair is starting to grow. It is very short and fine but i know this, i will have alot more. I spend alot of my time exercising, I can turn my head and curl my figures and toes, and stretch my arms and legs. I am becoming quiet good at it too."

I love how in this stanza, he is talking about moving around and his abilities, absoluetly mind-blowing, definetly a favorite by you..

"Month Five
You went to the doctor today. Mommy, he lied to you. He said I'm not a baby, I am a baby, your baby! I think and feel. Mommy one question, what's abortion?"

Wow, my heart is aching here, this is just so sad but moving. You made him sound so innocent, because he is, and that last line just brought the tears!

"Month Six
I can hear the doctor again. I don't like him at all. He seems cold and heartless. Something is intruding my home. The doctor called it a needle. Mommy what is it? It burns by the tender touch of it! PLEASE make him stop!! I can't get away from it!!! MOMMY!! HELP ME!!"

Excellent emotions here that just stun the reader and make them feel so heartbreaking when reading it, really describes the horror and terror that abortion is.

"Month Seven
Mommy, i am OK. I am in Jesus's arms. He is holding me. He told me about abortion, why didn't you want me...mommy...?"

I love the dramtic pause here, and now he is safe and sound in Jesus's arms, but really wants to know why is mommy didn't want him...

"Every Abortion is just...
One more heart that never felt the touch of love. Two eyes that will never see the world. Two more hands that will never touch. Two more legs that will never get to explore the world. One more mouth that will never speak...!"

I am speechless dear, these words are beyond true and the way you worded this sumed up everything I felt and thought. Nice job hun, 5/5 from me....Your words really touched me deeply and I hope more people read this and know the truth about abortion, take care...

This poem is very touching because i had this happened in my life before. My brother and his girlfriend didnt plan on having my nephew and they or should i say she tried to get an abortion but thanks to god that she came to her senses and now my nephew is 8 months old almost walking and he already said his first word and a couple of other words.

this poem is very very well written so great job.